Friday 28 December 2007

Chapter 2 - Part A

Hovering above its surface Carelle prodded the Veil with a toe, it gave, slightly depressing under applied pressure, it felt warm, organic, alive, oily. It was the boarder, a line of quarantine between the Disputed Zone and the rest of the Empire.

She was on her way to the Imperial Planetary System, but first she was taking a detour, a sightseeing mission. This system, this Eden Project was at the centre of it all, Fracture, personal and familial separations and if she was being called to confront her pains then seeing the place where they began might help.

1 comment:

  1. Good thus far. Again with the long sentences. Reading it on the computer is a bit harder than a book. Shaping up to be one cool read. :)

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